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Related: About this forumNeed a place to put this down, maybe get reaction
Meditating, then writing
Rolling through the Summer,
Rolling through the Fall,
Anyone anywhere still standing tall?
Singing songs of Sorrow,
Singing songs of Peace.
Rolling through the Summer,
Rolling through the Fall,
We're marching on together One and All.
Morning, Thursday, July 16, 2020
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Need a place to put this down, maybe get reaction (Original Post)
bobbieinok
Jul 2020
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SheltieLover
(58,465 posts)1. Very nicely done!
MLAA
(18,160 posts)2. I like it 🙂
pdxflyboy
(708 posts)3. Thank you for those verses, bobbieinok. +++
bobbieinok
(12,858 posts)4. Thank you for responses
The first 2 lines just sorta 'appeared'. Had to spend bit of time, effort on rest
I 'm not a poetry writer by any means. But this morning these words just seemed 'right.'
Amy-Strange
(854 posts)5. Nice rhythm, balance and imagery, and...
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maybe I'm just an old guy, but the strolling "rolling" part reminds me of an old Ike & Tina Turner song (covered by CCR), Proud Mary:
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