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RSherman

(576 posts)
Mon Apr 24, 2023, 03:35 PM Apr 2023

Nightly visits from Rebecca Alynn

My sister passed away 10 years ago at age 46. She has been visiting my dreams, so I wrote a poem for her:


A VISIT FROM BECKY

My sister passed
from this world,
gone,
like a puff of smoke.

Extinguished,
a cinder girl
reduced to ash.

Her last life’s breath,
exhaled and rose,
a mystic mist,
to form a cloud.

At night,
wispy tendrils
swirl and descend.
She seeps,
full bodied,
into my dreams.


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Nightly visits from Rebecca Alynn (Original Post) RSherman Apr 2023 OP
Oh wow. Maraya1969 Apr 2023 #1
BEAUTIFUL!!! Karadeniz Apr 2023 #2
K&R 2naSalit Apr 2023 #3
Beautiful. Sending hugs. n/t livetohike Apr 2023 #4
This is a beautiful description of the the loss of another delisen Apr 2023 #5
Perfect comment! RSherman Apr 2023 #6
What a lovely eulogy for your beloved sister, my dear RSherman . . . CaliforniaPeggy Apr 2023 #7
I love this poem. Dark n Stormy Knight Sep 2023 #8

RSherman

(576 posts)
6. Perfect comment!
Mon Apr 24, 2023, 05:52 PM
Apr 2023

Thank you so much for "getting it". I could not have said it better. Did you notice all of the lines are in the past tense until the end?

CaliforniaPeggy

(152,069 posts)
7. What a lovely eulogy for your beloved sister, my dear RSherman . . .
Mon Apr 24, 2023, 09:35 PM
Apr 2023

It's a wonderful poem.

I hope that it brings you relief from your sorrow.

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