General Discussion

The letter is 528 words long and has 20 grammatical errors. Here they all are.

•“Great Honor” – unnecessary capitalization (should be “great honor”)

•“Trading Relationship” – should be “trading relationship”

•“Trade Deficit” – should be “trade deficit”

•“Country.” – awkward sentence structure leading into “Nevertheless,” (run-on-like transition)

•“TRADE.” – no need for all caps; “trade” would suffice

•“Number One Market in the World, by far.” – informal and poorly structured for a formal letter

•“Tariff, and Non Tariff, Policies” – should be “tariff and non-tariff policies”
(hyphen needed; unnecessary commas)

•“far from Reciprocal” – “reciprocal” should not be capitalized

•“only 25% on any and all Japanese products” – awkward phrasing; “on all Japanese products” would be clearer

•“separate from all Sectoral Tariffs.” – “sectoral tariffs” should not be capitalized

•“Tariff” – capitalized repeatedly when it shouldn’t be

•“Tariff will be subject to that higher Tariff.” – redundant and confusing phrasing

•“we will do everything possible to get approvals quickly, professionally. and routinely” – period should be a comma or semicolon

•“In other words, in a matter of weeks.” – fragment; awkward placement and tone

•“If for any reason you decide to raise your Tariffs, then, whatever the number you choose to raise them by,” – clunky and redundant

•“Please understand that these Tariffs…” – “tariffs” should not be capitalized

•“Tariff, and Non Tariff,” – again, “non-tariff” should be hyphenated and neither word should be capitalized

•“Trade Barriers,” – unnecessary capitalization

•“This Deficit is a major threat…” – “deficit” should not be capitalized

• “National Security!” – overly dramatic; should be lowercase and period, not exclamation mark